Wednesday, August 5, 2009

143;

"Truly Pathetic"
Lately, the weather aches;
the air is short of breath,
and morning stumbles in, stiff-jointed.

Day by day, the sun bores the sky,
until the moon begins
its some disappearing act,
making the oceans yawn.

Even the seasons change
with a throb of weariness—
bud, bloom, leaf, fall.

If it would help,
I would paint my house silver
or sell it or buy
a red convertible.

I would, but who am I
to try to cheer up
the self-indulgent universe.

Neal Bowers


i'm actually posting this poem because i really don't like it. i think it's a crock of shit. your thoughts?

2 comments:

  1. I honestly like this part...

    "I would, but who am I
    to try to cheer up
    the self-indulgent universe."

    It fits my mood.

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  2. damnit clint,
    that's the part i hate the most!

    let's hang soon.

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